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This is my first one soo Dont be mean plz...

PrussiaxReader

"Alfred F.  Jones!! " You screamed at your friend while he pulled you into another one of his drunken parties.  Of course you didn't want to come like always (Mostly because last time you had awoken on Alfred's yard drenched by his sprinklers), but he pulled you along any way.

"C'mon _____! Your Hero is here to watch out for you. So don't worry bouta thang" He finished off like a pimp in a classic 80'S movie. You smiled at him as he  opened the car door for you.

"If only I believed you!" You teased and walked to the door of Alfred's Mansion. IT WAS HUGE!!  And huge being the first word that popped in your head. You heard the music from a mile away.  It had a nice vibe. Now it was kind of exciting you.

"You ready to go in?" Alfred asked with a goofy grin plastered on his face.  You nodded and got ready for a crazy night. As soon as the door swung open the decibels of the music made it seem a hundred times the legal limit. You and Alfred walked together arms hooked, but soon you let go because they played (insert fave song here).

You had to shove into the crowd because people were knee to knee and back to back on the dance floor. Oh and the things you had seen will blind you forever. Like Ludwig and Feliciano were groping and making out. Russia was dirty dancing with a surf board. Halfway through the song, you found a spot not to crowded and danced away.

-------TIME SKIPP Bunny  Hopps PAST the screen!-------


You have been dancing continuously for at least 45 minutes and stopped to take a break.  While walking over to the snack table you notice a few things. The first that a Sexy Dj keeps eyeing you from his position. Second He's HAWT!!! And finally you don't have enough balls to talk to the pale man.

You giggled when he noticed you were missing from your spot on the dance floor. He frowned  and scanned the room

This Dj was interesting. Not only was he the cutest albino ever, but his scarlet eyes seemed to be only fixated on you. "Hey everyone!!" The albino yelled,"It's time for this awesome DJ to take a break, so Alfred here will play something good for you!" He smiled into the microphone.

Little did you know he was actually taking the break to search for you.

A few moments later you were standing up, eyes closed although moving to the beat. Until a certain perverse Frenchmen came and grabbed your ass. Of course you kicked him to the floor; unfortunately he rose up like Nosferatu from his coffin.

This action made your skin crawl and on his way up you heard a lot of Ohonhonhonhonhons.

And where was your hero in a time of need. Under the DJ booth flirting with a blond bimbo.

You winced as your favorite Sexy DJ came and smacked Francis so hard hid head hit the edge of the snack table and knocking him out.

"You two were causing a commotion, frau "He panted and looked at you. You smirked knowing  his weakness made your confidence boost up.

"Well nice to meet you too." You said full of spunk. He grinned at you and moved closer once his breath was back to normal.

"Im Gilbert." He said grabbing you and taking you outside of Alfred's Party.
it is my First reader-insert .. Im wondering if i should continue and other stuff. :O

I would luv to write more
but i need to know how this turns out SOOOOO hope YOU LIKE IT!! XD
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skittles-and-hetalia Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Student General Artist
I know who the DJ is!!! It's romania, but he changed his name to gilbert!! >xD jk I know it's Prussie~
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KionnaChase Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Hehe Romania would be a good DJ!!!
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skittles-and-hetalia Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Student General Artist
indeed he would be
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glaceon007 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Student General Artist
This is so awesome~ I love it~
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KionnaChase Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks
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NostaligicDreamer Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Germany y Italy were what?!?!? -dies- like this so far.
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KionnaChase Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Groping .. You know you wanted to see more ^o^
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NostaligicDreamer Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Vell.... Maybe I do maybe I don't... I don't really like lemons because they make me feel uncomfortable.
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KionnaChase Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Im happy to see a different type of Fangirl :D
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NostaligicDreamer Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you're happy. I'm not too obessessed with lemons.
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shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
really cute -AND AWESOME!!! ah sorry Prussia took over my keyboard for a sec there!! ^^
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KionnaChase Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Hehe Thanks
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shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no prob ^^
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PrussiaAustria2018 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist
MORE PLEASE! It is AWESOME!
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KionnaChase Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Yes yes. and thanx
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PrussiaAustria2018 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist
Welcome ^_^
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Shadowy-Nights Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012   General Artist
You should continue!!! o3o I love it so far!! :D
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KionnaChase Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
I will and thx
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honey-sensei Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Same Idea as one of my stories...(the Dj! thing. not the plot)
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:iconkionnachase:
KionnaChase Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Great minds think alike
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honey-sensei Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
true,I haven't finished mine yet...I think I'm going to make it 3 parts...if i would start typing it
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KionnaChase Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
I cant wait to read it when you put it up :)
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honey-sensei Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Part one is up. I'm thinking I'm going to redo it though...
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KionnaChase Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
I like it
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honey-sensei Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
'danks!? I kind of think i suck
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KionnaChase Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
it didnt
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TheEdgeOfTheSea Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconneedmoarplz:
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KionnaChase Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
i'll try to get it done later today X3
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TheEdgeOfTheSea Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yay! :iconlawooplz:
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KionnaChase Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
^o^
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Skylar-The-Cat Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
I normally hate the 'awesome one, but I actually like this. I want MOAR!
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KionnaChase Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Of course there's gonna be more!!!
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Skylar-The-Cat Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
:meow:
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